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aw, im gonna cry TT

really beautiful piece, until you got to that strange horn thing at 00:45 and 02:05. could've done with a different effect, but otherwise another beautiful song.

5'd fav'd downloaded!

wow.....

ah-freaking-mazing! new favorite track! this makes me want to stop making songs, because i fell like i'll never be able to best this!

AUUGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if you could give me some pointers on my own work, i might come close to this though.

Metalcan responds:

Wow thanks! Don't stop making songs because of this though! :)

Well I don't know what to say, I tend to approach music making in many different ways. I'd maybe get Computer Music magazine for some inspiration and music making tips. Just try to find a way that works for you, and keep practising. If something doesn't work in your song, change it. Don't just expect to make a song from start to finish without rearranging and replacing parts. Don't be afraid to erase bad parts completely and make something different. Hopefully you'll get a nice result in the end. :)

YEAH!

My personal favorite version. MORE SONGS!

meh

It almost sounds like all you did was decrease the tempo, cut out a bit and change one of the effects, but it does make it enough of a change to be a remix. I wish you would've done more with it, but it was god nonetheless.

Ruby-S responds:

Yeah it was'nt much i did.
But thanks for the review!

well..........

well, you had a good start. a REALLY good start. then you screwed it up.

The first guitar riff you have is awesome. The second guitar you have come in needs its notes changed, and the third can go away, it's way too high pitched.

Please redo this, its sounds great otherwise!

It's a summary

Hmm....... kinda reminds me of Bone Thugs in Harmony. The gunshot sounds horrible. Sounds like bubble wrap. Get that fixed. And try to turn down the whole "I'm a gangter" thing you have going in the lyrics. Good track though. Gets a 4.

ELEVENT responds:

Hmm if you listen to the lyrics it's talking AGAINST rap that glorifies the whole "G" lifestyle. I mention a few times that I'm not a thug and will never be a ganster rapper.

ha ha......

i lol'd

wow

um, wow......................I uh...................................
.......

wow.

some suggestions

1. Try not using that Acid without changing it a little

2. Make the riffs a little more diverse, chop them up

Other than that, good job. Its got a nice trance-like background to it.

BlkAce responds:

Alright

Thanks for the suggestions!

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